Turned I fifteen and was drawn towards her
Was it the first crush or love as often they say
Bewitched had she me with smile mesmerizing
And felt I in core of my heart an ache so blissful
Reservoir serene of solace she became for me
To look and to hide the look her invincible style
But, Never did I nor she ever expressed heart
But both knew had we something for each other
The viscissitudes of life Then moved us apart
Departed were we with the hearts unexpressed
Thus were parted the hearts from each other
Again are we brought together face to face
But now gone is the smile enticing and look
As belong now we to different lives of world
Her heart no more mine and mine not hers
Mine now other’s and other’s was hers too
Thus is she lost to me and me to her.
'Untold Love', Lost love in both ends.. Jagdish, yet another great post from you.. Smiles.. hope you like this, to have loved and lost
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" Better to have loved & lost
ReplyDeletethan never to have loved .... "
Like you , many are sailing in the same boat, so no regrets !
Nice poem- dil ke kareeb !
Good one on lost love.
ReplyDeletea wonderfully crafted balance of stlyle and story niether dominating the mix creating a bigger whole than the two pieces together... impressive and to the truth :)
ReplyDeleteFollowing your blog now.
ReplyDeletenice poem
ReplyDeleteIts a very orderly style of penning down your feelings..
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Hehehe.. love of sweet sixteen..:P
ReplyDeletefun verse... keep it up.
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Happy Writing.
Looking forward to seeing you share your talent with us.
You rock.
xx
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ReplyDeletewell written
ReplyDelete"Bewitched had she me with smile mesmerizing
And felt I in core of my heart an ache so blissful"
Beautifully written... I felt the same when I fell in love first. The last lines are true in my case too... Now my family is more important than anything
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काश कभी ऐसा हो जाए ,
दुनिया में बस हम और तुम हो ,
सारा जग खो जाए ,
Reminds me of my first crush, while fifteen, as well.Plan a blog post on her too. The thought has been around a while now :)
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