Sunday, March 13, 2011

Lost Love

Turned I fifteen and was drawn towards her
                                          Was it the first crush or love as often they say   
Bewitched had she me with smile mesmerizing
                                         And felt I in core of my heart an ache so blissful  
Reservoir serene of solace she became for me
                                         To look and to hide the look her invincible style
But, Never did I nor she ever expressed heart
                                        But both knew had we something for each other
The viscissitudes of life Then moved us apart
                                        Departed were we with the hearts unexpressed
Thus were parted the hearts from each other
                                       Again are we brought together face to face
But now gone is the smile enticing and look
                                       As belong now we to different lives of world
Her heart no more mine and mine not hers
                                       Mine now other’s and other’s was hers too
Thus is she lost to me and me to her. 


  1. 'Untold Love', Lost love in both ends.. Jagdish, yet another great post from you.. Smiles.. hope you like this, to have loved and lost

    Someone is Special

  2. " Better to have loved & lost
    than never to have loved .... "

    Like you , many are sailing in the same boat, so no regrets !

    Nice poem- dil ke kareeb !

  3. a wonderfully crafted balance of stlyle and story niether dominating the mix creating a bigger whole than the two pieces together... impressive and to the truth :)

  4. Its a very orderly style of penning down your feelings..

  5. Hehehe.. love of sweet sixteen..:P

  6. fun verse... keep it up.

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    simply visit me for details...all submissions are to be represented by the end of the week.
    Happy Writing.
    Looking forward to seeing you share your talent with us.
    You rock.

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  8. well written
    "Bewitched had she me with smile mesmerizing
    And felt I in core of my heart an ache so blissful"

  9. Beautifully written... I felt the same when I fell in love first. The last lines are true in my case too... Now my family is more important than anything

  10. अच्छे है आपके विचार, ओरो के ब्लॉग को follow करके या कमेन्ट देकर उनका होसला बढाए ....

  11. व्यस्तता के कारण देर से आने के लिए माफ़ी चाहता हूँ.

    आप मेरे ब्लॉग पे पधारे इस के लिए बहुत बहुत धन्यवाद् और आशा करता हु आप मुझे इसी तरह प्रोत्सन करते रहेगे
    दिनेश पारीक

    दूरियां होने से यादे धुंधली हो जाती लेकिन कुछ यादें ऐसी होती है जो जिंदगी भर आप के साथ रहती है | यादे खट्टी मीठी सी उन्ही यादो के झरोखों से आप सब के लिए एक कविता लायी हूँ | जो कि मेरी नहीं अश्वनी दादा कि है उनकी ही इजाजत से आप सब के सामने रख रही हूँ |
    काश कभी ऐसा हो जाए ,
    दुनिया में बस हम और तुम हो ,
    सारा जग खो जाए ,

  12. Reminds me of my first crush, while fifteen, as well.Plan a blog post on her too. The thought has been around a while now :)